泰戈尔：生命之流 （Penkyamp式粤拼翻译）

泰戈尔：生命之流 （Penkyamp式粤拼翻译）


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sänkmènk jï law 生命之流

fänyèk jì: praan 翻译自：生命之流
jôgjẽ: Rabindranath Tagore (mànggäläi) 作者：拉边德拉纳·泰戈尔 （印度孟加拉邦）


tonkyätgô sänkmènk jï law ,
yàtyè ceünguô ngó gê heûdmàk .
tonkyätgô sänkmènk jï law
ceünguô saygän,
hãy jîdpag jönk tîudònk .

同一个生命之流
日夜穿过我嘅血脉
同一个生命之流
穿过世间
在节拍中跳动

jênk hày nïgô tonkyätgô sänkmènk,
hãy fünyeùd jönk,
jôgway cïnmàn tiu cënkcõw gê yawnga ,
ceûncöt naytõw ,
yinhàw fajôg bödònk gê jïyìb tonk fädõ .

正系呢个同一个生命
在欢悦中
作为千万条青草嘅幼芽
穿出泥土
然后化作波动嘅枝叶同花朵

jênkhày nïgô tonkyätgô sänkmènk ,
hãy hõiciu jeôngtôy gê yiulam jönk
sänksëk , sẽymong .

正系呢个同一个生命
在海潮涨退嘅摇篮中
生息，死亡

ngó gãmpdôw ngó gê sêyjï
way nïgô cönkmún sänkmènk gê saygai sõ
jökmõ yi fäywong .
ngó gê jìhow yàpbïn , yáwjeù
cïngũ sänkmènk gê màkbôg, yïgä
jênk hãy ngó gê heûdyèk jönk mówdònk .

我感到我嘅四肢
为呢个充满生命嘅世界所
触摸而辉煌
我嘅自豪入边，有住
千古生命嘅脉搏，而家
正在我嘅血液中舞动

灵使兮 真兮， 示我以 完满， 涤我以 甘霖， 引我至 永生 于 圣王之 阳光， 吾将以 水火相克 而 献己身， 仅存 善思 以受 慈悲

1

GITANJALI

Thou hast made me endless, such is thy pleasure.

This frail vessel thou emptiest again and again, and fillest it ever with fresh life.

This little flute of a reed thou hast carried over hills and dales, and hast breathed through it melodies eternally new.

At the immortal touch of thy hands my little heart loses its limits in joy and gives birth to utterance ineffable.

Thy infinite gifts come to me only on these very small hands of mine. Ages pass, and still thou pourest, and still there is room to fill.


一、

你將我整成永恆嘅生命，你鍾意咁就咁

你成日將呢個脆弱嘅器皿潷咗又倒空，總系換上新鮮嘅生命

你將呢支細細嘅蘆葦笛帶過山丘同澗谷，每次都吹入永遠新鮮嘅曲調

喺你不死嘅手掌嘅觸摸下，我幼小嘅心情不自禁，誕生出唔可以名狀嘅話語

你嘅無數嘅禮物唔停咁放落我細小嘅雙手入邊

世紀遷移，但係你重繼續咁傾灑恩賜，但係宇宙入邊重有堆唔滿嘅空間
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一、
你將我整成永恆嘅生命
你鍾意咁就咁
你成日將呢個脆弱嘅器皿
潷滿咗又倒空
總系換上新生命
你將呢支細細嘅蘆葦笛
帶過山丘同澗谷
每次都吹入
永遠新鮮嘅歌仔
喺你不死嘅手掌嘅觸摸下
我幼小嘅心，情不自禁
誕生出唔可以名狀嘅話語
你嘅無數嘅禮物
唔停咁放落我
細小嘅雙手入邊
世紀遷移
但係你重系繼續咁傾灑恩賜
而宇宙入邊
重有永遠堆唔完嘅空間



《yät》

néy jeöng ngó jẽnk senk wénkhank gê sänkmènk

néy jönkyî gãmp jàw gãmp

néy senkyàt jeöng nïgô côyyeòg gê hêyménk

bätmún jõ yàw dõwhönk

jõnkhày wùnseóng säntsänkmènk

néy jeöng nïjï sâysây gê lowwáy dẽg

dâiguô sänyäw tonk gângök

múicî döw cöyyàp

wénkyeún säntsïn gê göjãy

hãy néy bätsẽy gê sãwjeõng gê jökmõ hà

ngó yâwsĩu gê sämp， cenk bät jìgâmp

dânsänk cöt mhõyí menkjòng gê wàyeú

néy gê mowsôw gê láymàt

mtenk gãmp fônglòg ngó

sâysĩu gê seöngsãw yàpbïn

sâygẽy cïnyi

dànhày néy jònkhày gâyjòk gãmp kënksã yäntcî

yi yeújàw yàpbïn

jònkyáw wénkyeún döy m yeun gê hönkgän

粤译 颉檀吒利 逐篇
http://bbs.cantonese.asia/viewthread.ph ... #pid206415
http://zime-web.appspot.com/static/type ... ema=canton
http://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Gitanjali

2

When thou commandest me to sing it seems that my heart would break with pride; and I look to thy face, and tears come to my eyes.
All that is harsh and dissonant in my life melts into one sweet harmony--and my adoration spreads wings like a glad bird on its flight across the sea.
I know thou takest pleasure in my singing. I know that only as a singer I come before thy presence.
I touch by the edge of the far-spreading wing of my song thy feet which I could never aspire to reach.
Drunk with the joy of singing I forget myself and call thee friend who art my lord.

颉檀吒利 Gitanjali 二

二、

喺你嗌我唱歌嗰陣
我個心好似得戚到想爆咁
我睇住你塊面
禁不住流眼水

我生命中所有殘酷同煩擾嘅嘢
都融化成好甜嘅旋律
我嘅愛慕好似只開心嘅雀
拍翼飛過大海

我知道你好鍾意我唱歌
我知道我只有唱歌嗰陣
先能夠接近到你面前

我搵我首歌嘅嗰張
伸展嘅羽翼
掂到我以前
從來唔敢接觸嘅腳尖

我喺歌聲入邊
自我陶醉
自己系邊個都唔記得
重將梵天你
叫做老友記

《yì》


hãy néy ngâi ngó ceônggö gõjãnt
ngó gô sämp hõwcí däkcëk dôw seõng bâu gãmp
ngó tãyjeù néy fâi mìn
gâmp m jeù law ngánsõy

ngó sänkmènk jönk sõyáw canhòk tonk fanyĩu gê yé
döw yonkfâ senk hõw tim gê seunlõt
ngó gê ngôimòw hõwcí jêg höisämp gê jeôgjãy
pâgyèk fëyguô dàihõi

ngó jïdòw néy hõw jönkyî ngó ceônggö
ngó jïdòw ngó jĩyáw ceônggö gõjãnt
sïn nankgâw jîbgànt dõw néy mìncin

ngó wãnt ngó sãw gö gê gõ jeöng
säntjĩn gê yeúyèk
dîm dõw ngó yícin
conkloi mèy gãmp jîbjök gê geôgjïm

ngó hãy gösënk yàpbïn
jìngó towjôy
jìgëy hày bïngô döw m gêydäk
jònk jeöng fantïn néy
gîujòw lówyáwgêy

3

I know not how thou singest, my master! I ever listen in silent amazement.
The light of thy music illumines the world. The life breath of thy music runs from sky to sky. The holy stream of thy music breaks through all stony obstacles and rushes on.
My heart longs to join in thy song, but vainly struggles for a voice. I would speak, but speech breaks not into song, and I cry out baffled. Ah, thou hast made my heart captive in the endless meshes of thy music, my master!



三。

阿師父啊，我唔知你系點唱歌嘅
我不朽都喺度無聲咁欣賞，嘆為觀止

你啲音樂嘅光喺度普照世界
你啲音樂嘅氣息從呢個天吹到遞個天
你啲音樂嘅聖泉從每一個細小嘅石嚹入邊涓出來，繼續奔湧

我嘅心好恨融入你啲歌入邊
但係我想呀都呀唔出聲

我噏到嘢
但係我啲講話聲變唔出歌聲
我只好好困惑咁大嗌

唏，師父！你等我嘅心
困喺你啲音樂嘅無邊嘅網入邊喇





《säm》

â sïfũ â, ngó m jï néy hày dĩm ceônggö gê

ngó bätläw döw hãydòw mowsënk gãmp yäntseõng, tân way gün jĩ

néy dï yämpngòg gê guöng hãydòw põwjîu sâygâi

néy dï yämpngòg gê hêysëk conk nïgô tïn cöy dôw gõgô tïn

néy dï yämpngòg gê sênkceun conk múi yätgô sâysĩu gê sèglâ yàpbïn geün cötlay, gâyjòk bäntyõnk

ngó gê sämp hõw hànt yonkyàp néy dï gö yàpbïn

dànhày ngó seõng ngë döw ngë m cöt sëng

ngó ngäp dõw yé

dànhày ngó dï gõngwà sëng bîn m cöt gösënk

ngó jĩhõw hõw kuântwàg gãmp dàingâi

hêy, sïfũ! néy dãnk ngó gê sämp wânt hãy néy dï yämpngòg gê mowbïn gê móng yàpbïn lâg!

後邊幾篇至係真正嘅粵譯，最好用香港語言學會嘅粵拼加標調嚟做粵文嘅拉丁化。

雖然亞penkyamp生嘅政治理念我好多都唔認受，不過我好相信亞penkyamp生喺文學方面嘅修為。

希望penkyamp生可以對歐陸啟蒙時代嘅五大名哲：孟德斯鳩、伏爾泰、盧梭、康德、洛克嘅作品關注下，得閒嘅就做多啲呢方面文章嘅粵譯。

我建議，雖然啟蒙時代嘅理性主義者系好嘢，但係現階段最能夠促發粵文化精神文明復興嘅，應該系嗰啲超越理性嘅具有靈性嘅作品。我建議 譯 泰戈爾 同俄羅斯文豪 托爾斯泰。

英國文豪 Wordsworth, 拜倫。

你能唔能夠幫手將幾個文豪嘅詩歌作品用純粵語搬上論壇，加上拉丁標調版？（千其唔好唔標調，前功盡廢）

頡檀吒利 粵譯 四

4

Life of my life, I shall ever try to keep my body

pure, knowing that thy living touch is upon all my

limbs.
I shall ever try to keep all untruths out from my

thoughts, knowing that thou art that truth which has

kindled the light of reason in my mind.
I shall ever try to drive all evils away from my

heart and keep my love in flower, knowing that thou

hast thy seat in the inmost shrine of my heart.
And it shall be my endeavour to reveal thee in my

actions, knowing it is thy power gives me strength

to act.


四、

我生命嘅生命
我要不朽咁淨化我嘅身體
因為我知道你喺度親手咁掂住我嘅手腳

我要不朽咁將啲唔真實嘅思想趕嗮出我嘅腦海
因為我知道你就係嗰個點着我心靈入邊理性之光嘅真理

我要不朽咁將所有邪惡趕出我嘅心靈
將我嘅愛保護喺朵鮮花入邊
因為我知道你嘅寶座就喺我心靈最入邊嘅聖壇上面

用我嘅行為來透露你系我嘅目的
因為你嘅能量畀咗我做一切事情嘅力氣






《sêy》

ngó sänkmènk gê sänkmènk

ngó yîu bätläw gãmp jèngfâ ngó gê sänttãy

yäntwày ngó jïdòw néy hãydòw cäntsãw gãmp dîm jeù ngó gê sãwgeôg

ngó yîu bätläw gãmp jeöng dï m jäntsàt gê sïseõng gõn sâi cöt ngó gê nówhõi

yäntwày ngó jïdòw néy jàwhày gõgô dĩmjeòg ngó sämplenk yàpbïn léysênk jï guöng gê jäntléy

ngó yîu bätläw gãmp jeöng sõ-yáw ce-ngôg gõncöt ngó gê sämplenk

jeöng ngó gê ngôi bõwwù hãy deõ sïnfä yàpbïn

yäntwày ngó jïdòw néy gê bõwjò jàw hãy ngó sämplenk jôy yàpbïn gê sênktan seòngmìn

yònk ngó gê hankway lay tâwlòw néy hày ngó gê mòkdëk

yäntwày néy gê nankleòng bẽy jõ ngó jòw yätcây sìcenk gê lèkhêy

5

I ask for a moment's indulgence to sit by thy side. The works that I have in hand I will finish afterwards.
Away from the sight of thy face my heart knows no rest nor respite, and my work becomes an endless toil in a shoreless sea of toil.
Today the summer has come at my window with its sighs and murmurs; and the bees are plying their minstrelsy at the court of the flowering grove.
Now it is time to sit quite, face to face with thee, and to sing dedication of life in this silent and overflowing leisure.



五、

我想請求你畀我一分鐘坐喺你身邊

我手上做緊嘅嘢等陣先完成

除咗睇住你嘅面容

我嘅心都平息唔到，停歇唔到

而我嘅工作就變成咗無邊嘅苦海入邊嘅勞作

今日夏天帶住佢嘅感嘆同啽沉來到我嘅窗前

蜜蜂喺花叢嘅宮殿前夾 band

而家最好就系靜雞雞咁坐住

面對面咁睇住你

喺呢個無聲嘅，滿瀉嘅閒暇入邊

唱贊頌生命嘅歌



頡檀吒利 粵譯 五


《ńg》


ngó seõng cẽngkaw néy bẽy ngó yät fäntjönk có hãy néy säntbïn

ngó sãwseòng jòwgãnt gê yé dãnkjãnt sïn yeunsenk

coyjõ tãyjeù néy gê mìnyonk

ngó gê sämp döw penksëk m dõw, tenkhîd m dõw

yi ngó gê gönkjôg jàw bînsenk jõ mowbïn gê fũhõi yàpbïn gê lowjôg

gämpyàt hà-tïn dâijeù kóy gê gãmptân tonk ngampcamp laydôw ngó gê ceöng cin

màtfönk hãy fäconk gê gönkdìn cin gâbbën

yïgä jôyhõw jàwhày jènkgäygäy gãmp có jeù

mìndôymìn gãmp tãy jeù néy

hãy nïgô mowsënk gê, múnsẽ gê hanha yàpbïn

ceông jânjònk sänkmènk gê gö

6

Pluck this little flower and take it, delay not! I fear lest it droop and drop into the dust.
I may not find a place in thy garland, but honour it with a touch of pain from thy hand and pluck it. I fear lest the day end before I am aware, and the time of offering go by.
Though its colour be not deep and its smell be faint, use this flower in thy service and pluck it while there is time.


六、

摘咗呢朵花
帶走佢
快啲啦

我系驚朵花慢慢沉落去
掂落啲塵土上邊啊

我可能喺你嘅花環上搵唔到地方來插佢
但係我用你摘佢嗰陣嘅嗰陣痛來榮耀佢

我驚喺我醒起之前
呢一日就結束咗
而奉獻亦過咗期

雖然朵花嘅顏色好淺
香味亦好淡
但係重系及時咁摘咗佢
為你所用啦



《lòk》


jàg jõ nï dõ fä

dâi jãw kóy

fâidï läh

ngó hày gëng dõ fä mànmän camp lòghôy

dîm lòg dï canttõw seòngbïn âh

ngó hõ-nank hãy néy gê fä-wan seòng wãnt mdõw dèyföng lay câb kóy

dànhày ngó yònk néy jàg kóy gõjãnt gê gõ jànt tônk lay wenkyìu kóy

ngó gëng hãy ngó sẽnkhẽy jïcin

nï yät yàt jàw gîdcök jõ

yi fònkhîn yèk guô jõ key

söyyin dõ fä gê ngansëk hõw cĩn

heöngmèy yèk hõw tám

dànhày jònkhày kàpsi gãmp jàg jõ kóy

way néy sõ yònk lä